attempt at new coloring style

i attempted to color using 's coloring tutorial ([link])
....and i failed miserably......X3.......well...kinda....i kinda like the black side but the white side o her looks very bad.....if u see this lyanti.....could u give me some pointers? or somethin? i donno.

this pose also came from one o my past pics lol sry, i just wanted to test this out. and i didnt want this to b anyone elses char just incase it came out like shit. i AM workin on the other pics right now tho. as today is my day off lol

tell em what u think....?

Twilight (c) me